The Importance of The Morality

AS far as I am concerned, there are many global challenges we have to face together. And I think one of the most serious problem is the abuse of the technology. It is obvious that different countries has various beliefs, values, histories, lifestyles and culture backgrounds. But I think, we need to utilize the basic value of the human being to lead our behavior. To be more precise, we need a guideline of our morality. In my view, every single person should fight for the science or activities which has the harm to the whole human beings. And we need to find a balance between the technology and the ethics. For example, in the past of time, people were so enjoyed the convenience the technology brought to us. But no one would think that today we are losing our freedom in some degree because some threat come from the society Internet. So, our privacy is being exposed under the pressure. At the same time, I associate some things about politics. It is clear that every presidents want to contribute a better countries for their citizens. So they do every things to push the development of the economy. As for politics, one of the countries always have the fight with another country of land because the problem about profit. And I saw a great amounts of reports said that different countries had the war between them because the conflict about the racial, region. I want to say that, it is normal for people has the awareness of protect the motherland. But I think it is a really important for people do not do the things over the line.  Like the dalilama said, we only have one plant, we need to make our effort and try our best to protect our plant. We are a whole family. In addition to this, we couldn’t just plan or picture the solution of a problem. We need to put it into practice. To be more precise, making some feasible solution from the short term to the long term. Beyond this, we have to treat the issues with our ration. Don’t put more emotion especially the prejudice to a thing, we could analyze a thing more widely and deeply.  

Essay 2

   I want to share my writing process and my questions about essay 2. My article is “Has Privacy Become a Luxury Good”. At first, I finished my summary. And then, I was thinking that which pattern was more suitable for me. After compared the three different pattern, I decided to choose the first one. Then I used many ways like brainstorm and freewriting to explore my ideas of the response. Later, I started to write my first draft. But after I finished it, I thought my essay had a lot of problems. First, some sentences were really confusing. Secondly, I thought my essay was a mess because I lack of the clear topic sentence. Thirdly, my transitional link with my thesis was too simple. So, I made some changes in my draft two. I changed my pattern to express some sentences. I used more condensed words in my topic sentence. I added more information between the summary and the response relatively. But I still have some questions about essay two. I wonder know what I should do to make my transitional link more nature. At the same time, I want to know which conclusion is a good conclusion. Do I need to summarize every important points of my precious paragraphs? And do I need to write a topic sentence for each different paragraphs? Is it ok to write one topic sentence in front of all my examples? Besides, what should I do to make my essay become more interesting?

Summary Of "My Favorite Teacher"

In the essay "My Favorite Teacher", Thomas L. Friedman wrote his journalism teacher who had the greatest influence on his life. Her name is Hattie. Thomas was taught by her when he was a high school student in 10^th grade. She harbored the view that getting the fundamentals right was the key of success. Precisely, she wanted her students to do things more professional and efficient. In addition to this, Hattie was so strict with her students. Thomas couldn’t fulfill the requirements of writing so she just let him to be a business manage and finished one story in his 11^th grade. She was also strict in supervising the yearbook. Although she wasn’t cool at all, her students still liked her very much. She treated her students very well. Meantime, she was not only a teacher but a good friend of her students. Besides, Hattie thought reading the New York Time was the fundamentals of being a real journalist. Her lessons still play an important role in current society. History proves that no matter a single individual or a country all need the fundamentals including reading, writing, arithmetic, church, synagogue and mosque, the rule of law and good governance. And  we need learn these fundamentals through the traditional way instead of just using the Internet.